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04/23/2012

Why I’m a Fan of Fiction

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Last year, I wrote a guest post for the Grammarly blog about writing, and how it is one of the most important skills you can develop. Today, this post on Iserotope (one of my favorite teacher blogs) inspired me to write a sequel about the importance of reading.

Specifically: the importance of reading fiction.

You might think that I’m a big fan of reading because it makes you a better writer. Or that it allows you to explore parts of the shared human experience that may be difficult to explain in a non-fiction format. Both of those things are true. But they’re not the reasons why I’m such a big fan of fiction.

The internet has made readers out of many, many people that almost never pick up a book in their entire lives. They read blogs, they read the news, and they read pithy little status updates from their friends. It may not be heavy duty stuff, but it is reading.

Without the kind of brain that sorts through the incredible amount of information we take in every day (174 newspapers worth, apparently) and makes connections between the relevant bits, we’d be no smarter on Tuesday than we were on Monday. And we would be getting quickly left behind by our friends, our family, and (most important, job-wise) our colleagues.

The ability to build mental bridges between all the random things we read and organize it all into a coherent network is a skill that is vital to a knowledge worker — and we’re all knowledge workers to some extent. This is what allows us to learn a lesson in one context and apply it broadly to other aspects of our life.

Nowhere is that kind of a talent development more naturally and organically than through fiction.

When a child reads the Chronicles of Narnia, for example, he is learning about the importance of exploration, of honesty, and of virtues like courage and forgiveness. He isn’t reading a pamphlet that spells it all out in bullet points. It’s not a blog post or a self-help book, but it is something that has the potential to stick with him for the rest of his life. And it’s a foundation upon which many of lessons can be based.

The more fiction we read — and the more great English teachers we have — the more we see that these works of fiction are more than simple stories or diversions. And we begin to connect the lessons we learn in one book with those we learn in another. We draw parallels, create connections, and build mental bridges.

The better we get at that, the more suited we are to dive into our modern world, where more information is created every year than the year before it. Understanding how to make sense of it all is not just a nice bonus. It is an essential element to being employable and staying relevant.

Sure, we can create high-level college courses to teach kids how to connect seemingly unrelated thoughts and build functional databases in their brain. We can call it “Mental Data Filing 101″ or something, and claim it’s a new science.

Or we can give them some great books to read as kids and they’ll start doing it on their own.

Don’t let an obsession with The Test strip fiction from our curriculum. There are cheap, online flashcards to help with test prep. (Did I mention we make those?) And there are excellent tutors out there to fill in the gaps. Teachers have skills that go far beyond preparing students to take a test. Let’s make use of them.

01/17/2012

4 Tips for Non-English Educators Using the Writing Process

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guest written by Kimberly Joki of Grammarly.

That writing is a necessary professional and life skill is universally accepted.  Interdisciplinary approaches to teaching writing are key to giving our students the necessary experience to grow into confident writers. However, despite increased writing-education efforts, many students are entering into and graduating from university with weak writing skills or are anxious and unsure of their writing abilities.

Reading Wim Coleman’s guest post  about incorporating story into the education of all subjects did two things.  First, it reminded me of my personal education experience, and how writing was creatively integrated into my history and music classes but glaringly absent in my math and science courses.  Second, it forced me to think about why writing is not taught more often across disciplines.   My conclusion? Basically, that teaching and including writing in a non-English subject is uncomfortable territory. Teachers avoid it. This article is aimed at giving some simple tips for successfully integrating writing of all genres into all subjects.

1. Know (and Use) the Writing Process

This may seem painfully obvious to some, but if you don’t have a writing background you may be unfamiliar with the writing process.  Successfully using writing as an education tool requires more than simply throwing a prompt or task out to be completed.  For all writing tasks, students should be guided through the process, not just asked for some product.

The writing process is composed of the following writing stages:

1) Pre-writing (The Thinking Stage): This is the stage when writers should brainstorm, decide on a topic, begin researching, and loosely organize their thoughts.

2) Drafting (The Writing Stage): This is the stage when all the ideas from the first stage are roughly fleshed out in writing.  Writers should begin sharing their writing with others as well as giving and receiving feedback.  For more assistance on stages 1 and 2, consider visiting Grammarly Handbook’s recommendation on Planning for Writing.

3) Revising (The Improvement Stage): Now, writers should be rereading, reorganizing, filling in gaps and, overall, improving the writing.  This stage often includes peer consultations and rewrites. The changes at this stage are relatively large.

4) Proofreading (The Housekeeping or Correcting Stage): At this point, writers should have all their ideas clearly organized and laid out.  The writing should be basically done.  Now, writers need to correct grammar, sentence, and other writing errors.  Students can help each other to edit their work.  Grammarly.com offers a number of resources that help students at this point in the writing process. If you want more information about stages 3 and 4, see Grammarly Handbook’s recommendations for Revising and Editing.

5) Publishing (The Presentation Stage): This is the final stage when writers are free to share the finished product. Get creative here. Presentation may include submitting the writing for a class book or to a class blog.

Now that you know what the writing process is, try using it — and not just with your students. Practice what you preach.  The more you use the process, the more comfortable and creative you’ll get with it.

2. Make the Purpose of Writing Clear and Concise

One of the most important aspects of using writing effectively in your classroom is making sure that your students (and you) are very confident about how writing is relevant to your subject and to the real-world application of your subject.  This may require some consideration.  But all subjects have wonderful and inspiring examples of writing within the field. Try focusing on how writing helps to communicate ideas and what role writing has had in the development of the subject as a field of study.  In addition, this may translate well into a great writing introduction. Have a class discussion and see what your students think about writing in relation to your subject.

3. Make Partnerships

Don’t go it alone!  Look for people and groups who are willing to work with and help you. This goes for teachers and students. Consider working with colleagues or other classrooms to integrate writing into your learning environment. For example, organize peer meetings between classrooms working on similar topics. These could be in the same building, same district, or done remotely using Skype or other conferencing programs.  Also, take opportunities to collaborate with other teachers and departments.  I was lucky to have a great experience in high school when studying World War II and the Holocaust.  My History, English, and Art teachers worked together to complement one another on the unit. The benefits of this approach aren’t limited only to the students, but it also allows teachers to share resources and rely on another.

4. Create a Personal Resource Library

And, finally, create your own resource library drawing upon the experiences of others in your subject who have included writing in their approach.  Don’t forget to include what has worked best for you in teaching writing.  In your library, you can include pieces of inspiration, track best practices, and include details about tools that have been helpful for you.  Consider sharing your resource library online to make it more collaborative.

Knowing the writing process, making writing relevant, partnering up, and tracking experiences will help you use writing to fulfill curriculum requirements and improve student writing skills and confidence.

If you have successfully integrated writing into your curriculum, what are your experiences, tips, and tricks?

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About the author: Kimberly D. Joki is the Community Manager for Grammarly.com and Grammarly@EDU, the world’s most accurate grammar and writing checker.  Kimberly has experience as a university writing consultant and as an ESL educator.
01/10/2012

Make History Come Alive with Stories

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guest written by Wim Coleman of Chiron Books.

In my previous post, I wrote about introducing storytelling techniques (especially dramatic ones) as an aid to teaching literature. In my fourth and final post as a guest here, I’ll to share some ideas for using storytelling in the classroom to teach history.

I’ve got a powerful personal memory along these lines from my senior year in high school. (It was in 1971-2, so you can do the math and figure out how old I am!) I had a brilliant and innovative American History teacher, whose assignments were, to put it mildly, dramatic. For example, he had one class break up into two groups and act out the American Civil War, using the entire high school campus as a stage.

But to me, his most memorable assignment was a less flamboyant one. My group was assigned to write and perform a play portraying the ideological conflict between the African-American Civil Rights leaders Booker T. Washington and W. E. B. Du Bois. A former slave, Washington advocated a “go slow” strategy to achieving racial equality; a historian and sociologist, Du Bois’s advocated a much more aggressive approach. The play was framed as a debate between the two.

Our group divided up tasks, ranging from research to typing. The actual writing and directing fell to me. It was a formative experience. I’ve been around theater since before I can remember, but it was the first time I’d really written a play. I’ve gone on to write more plays than I can count, many of them published and/or performed, and some of them award-winners. So really, this assignment was the beginning of a quasi-career. Also, exploring the polarity of thought between Washington and Du Bois helped form my own political worldview, especially concerning approaches to social activism.

Over the decades, I’ve kept a yellowed, mimeographed copy of this play, which lies in front of me right now. It’s no masterpiece, but it’s not bad for a high school student, and it brings back memories of one of the most stimulating intellectual experiences of my youth. It’s no small testament to the strength of classroom storytelling that an assignment like this can still resonate in one’s mind after 40 years!

Now we’ll get down to specifics. Let’s say that you’re teaching a unit on the American Civil War. Students quickly (and understandably) get bored learning by rote the names of generals and the dates of battles. Besides, such inert facts don’t give any sense of the issues, philosophies, agonies, and passions involved in that cataclysmic conflict. Dramatic storytelling can be a key to deeper understanding. I’ll toss out just four possible basic situations:

  • War breaks out in April 1861. Soon afterward in Philadelphia, a congregation of Quakers (The Religious Society of Friends) struggles with matters of conscience. On one hand, Quakers have long devoted themselves to the abolition of slavery and have actively participated in the Underground Railroad; on the other hand, Quakers have always been pacifistic. What should Quakers do now that the country is waging a war to end slavery—adhere to pacifism and resist conscription, or compromise their beliefs and join and support the Union Army? Write and perform a scene in which members of the congregation debate these choices.
  • While the war was raging, the publisher and abolitionist William Lloyd Garrison condemned the U.S. Constitution as “a Covenant with Death, an Agreement with Hell” because it allowed the continuance of slavery. Meanwhile, the former slave and journalist Frederick Douglass contended that the Constitution offered the surest means for abolishing slavery. Write and perform a scene in which Garrison and Douglass meet in a public place. Garrison is there to burn a copy of the Constitution; Douglass is there to pass out copies of it hot off his own printing press. They debate their positions to the crowd while engaged in these activities.
  • In Union-occupied South Carolina, an African-American family hears news of President Lincoln’s Emancipation Proclamation of January 1, 1863. The family now finds itself free. Write and perform a scene in which grandparents, parents, and children discuss dreams, dilemmas, possibilities, and choices. Have them consider both the Emancipation’s promises and limitations. While they are now “freedmen” encouraged to join the fight against slavery, the Emancipation does not yet end slavery altogether.

This is just a sampling of scenarios. Needless to say, the possibilities for the Civil War are practically unlimited. Also needless to say, it is easy to dream up endless assignments for any episode, period, or era in all of human history. Here I’ve suggested scenes that range from the intimately personal (the slave family) to the political and philosophical (Garrison and Douglass). I think it’s good to seek out such a range for greater resonance.

But I should caution that the instructions above aren’t really sufficient. They’re just a starting-point. Without a lot of clarity, this assignment won’t fully deliver the goods. My high school teacher, for example, was extremely specific about setting, story, and themes. He also took care that my group was prepared with a great deal of background information, making research part of the assignment.

I like ending this series of posts with one about history. It hints at how storytelling in the classroom encourages critical thinking, a vital but elusive goal in whatever subject you might be teaching. And it hints at the power of having students step into someone else’s shoes, relating even experiences of long ago and far away to one’s own contemporary, everyday life. Storytelling makes teaching and learning up-close, personal, and real.

 

About the author: Wim Coleman is a playwright whose works have won national awards and have been presented in New York and Los Angeles, and he is an award-winning poet. He has also been a teacher, and has degrees in Theater, Literature, and Education. He usually writes in collaboration with his wife, Pat Perrin. Together, they have well over 100 publications. They publish independently for young people through ChironBooks. Wim and Pat lived in various parts of the United States before spending thirteen years in San Miguel de Allende, where they created and administered the San Miguel PEN Scholarship Program for at-risk students. They also adopted their daughter, Monse, there. All three of them now live in Chapel Hill, North Carolina.  You can learn more about Wim and his work at his website.

12/20/2011

The Power of a Prequel

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guest written by Wim Coleman of Chiron Books.

In my last two posts, I hinted at how storytelling—especially improvisations and scripted scenes—can be used to teach almost any subject. Here I’m going to make some specific suggestions about a widely-taught work of literature.

Say you’re teaching Hamlet to your English class. Your students, of course, approach the play with dread. After all, “Shakespeare is so hard!” Well, I’ve edited and contributed to 11 educational editions of Shakespeare’s plays, and I don’t see any reason why this should be true. The problem is often a simple lack of pre-reading work. Students aren’t prepared to approach Hamlet’s daunting opening scene with its shivering guards spouting lots of exposition while the old king’s ghost silently comes and goes. They know nothing of the world they’re about to be plunged into.

This is where it helps to have your students write or act out prequels. First, give them enough information to understand the circumstances that precede the beginning of the play:

  • Claudius has murdered his brother, Denmark’s old King Hamlet, by pouring poison into his ear while he was sleeping in his orchard.
  • Claudius has hastily married Queen Gertrude, the late king’s wife.
  • Claudius has been crowned the new king.
  • Young Hamlet, the old king’s son, has returned from school in Wittenberg to attend both the funeral and the wedding.

This background could serve to write a whole new play. But let’s focus on just one scene: King Claudius proposing marriage to Queen Gertrude. Divide your students into groups of three or four. Each group will write a short script or prepare an outline for improvisation; two members of the group will act out their scene, playing Claudius and Gertrude. Assign each of the groups one of these variations:

  1. Claudius and Gertrude have been having an affair since before King Hamlet’s death, but Gertrude knows nothing about the murder.
  2. Claudius and Gertrude have been having an affair, and Gertrude is aware of the murder.
  3. Claudius and Gertrude have never had an affair, and Gertrude knows nothing about the murder.

Each of these scenarios is possible; indeed, critics, directors, and actors have been trying to choose among them for centuries. And obviously, these variations open up widely different interpretations of the play itself—the motives behind its characters and what they do. As your groups get to work, wander among them and drop all kinds of hints and suggestions, taking care to pose them as questions:

  • Did Gertrude and Claudius marry out of love or purely for political reasons?
  • How much did Gertrude love King Hamlet, if at all?
  • Does Gertrude love Claudius, or does she fear him?
  • If Gertrude doesn’t know about the murder, is it because Claudius has cunningly deceived her, or because she is in a semi-willful state of denial?
  • If Gertrude does know about the murder, was she Claudius’s accomplice, or did she find out about it after the fact?

And so on; the possibilities are just about endless. The idea is to provoke as rich a variety of possible scenes as you and your students can think up.

Some resulting scenes might be disappointing. Perhaps one group won’t get much further than to have Claudius ask, “Gertrude, will you marry me?” and have Gertrude reply, “I will, Claudius.” Don’t be too hard on groups that fall short like this. With some luck, you’ll get one or two scenes that are striking, even disturbing. I can imagine some fairly inventive students arriving at the following variation:

Claudius proposes to Gertrude on bended knee. But Gertrude has been suspicious of him since her husband’s mysterious death. She questions him cautiously, trying to find out if he was Hamlet’s murderer. Claudius won’t confess the deed, but turns menacing. He tells Gertrude that she must marry him and make him Denmark’s king—or she might face her husband’s fate. She marries him out of sheer terror and dares not question him further.

Of course, other scenes might paint very different pictures—for example, Gertrude utterly free of suspicion, a grieving widow innocently comforted by Claudius’s proposal of marriage.

After performing their prequels, students will be better prepared to read a play that is celebrated for its layers of ambiguity, its depth and mystery. They can review their scenes while reading the play. They may want to change their assumptions about what happened between Claudius and Gertrude during that fateful proposal, based on evidence that Shakespeare supplies (or doesn’t supply) in the text. A key moment is young Hamlet’s ruthless verbal assault on his mother in Act 3, scene 4, which is loaded with suspicions about what Gertrude knew and when she knew it.

A prequel is only one option for enriching your students’ experience with this play. There are also possible sequels (How does Fortinbras fare as Denmark’s new ruler?) and even “midquels” (Just what happens during Hamlet’s offstage adventure with the pirates in Act 4?).

I hope it’s obvious that my suggestions about Hamlet can be applied to just about any dramatic or fictional work. Right now, my daughter is reading William Golding’s Lord of the Flies in her English class. I’ve got my own ideas about how classroom storytelling could explore Golding’s theme of humanity’s innate savagery. Do students agree that marooned boys would inevitably lapse into brutality? They might select key moments from the novel and act them out so that they turn out differently, testing whether their own narratives are more or less plausible than Golding’s. Certainly, a sequel about the rehabilitation of the surviving boys would be interesting and informative.

In my last post, I mentioned using stories in History classes. I’ll write about that in my next post, after the holidays.

 

About the author: Wim Coleman is a playwright whose works have won national awards and have been presented in New York and Los Angeles, and he is an award-winning poet. He has also been a teacher, and has degrees in Theater, Literature, and Education. He usually writes in collaboration with his wife, Pat Perrin. Together, they have well over 100 publications. They publish independently for young people through ChironBooks. Wim and Pat lived in various parts of the United States before spending thirteen years in San Miguel de Allende, where they created and administered the San Miguel PEN Scholarship Program for at-risk students. They also adopted their daughter, Monse, there. All three of them now live in Chapel Hill, North Carolina.  You can learn more about Wim and his work at his website.

12/13/2011

A Story for all Subjects

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guest written by Wim Coleman of Chiron Books.

To continue my thoughts on narrative in the classroom, I’ll begin (appropriately) with a story.

When I was a college sophomore theater student, I belonged to a small acting group called ETC—The Educational Theater Company. Our job was to put on scenes in classrooms all over the college campus (and sometimes in nearby public schools) at a moment’s notice. Most of the work requested from us was predictable—scenes from classic plays, readers theater performances of fiction and poetry, all that sort of thing. But occasionally, we’d get an assignment that was obviously meant to stump us.

For example, an English Comp instructor asked us to come into his classroom and perform a piece about footnotes, informing students fully about style, format, punctuation, etc. The instructor chortled when he made the request. I’m sure he came up with other plans for that class period, doubtful that we would even show up.

But we surprised him and ourselves, using no media except our own bodies. We created a madcap sketch that portrayed self-creating footnotes, full of slapstick conflict. To be honest, we stole liberally from the late comic genius Victor Borges’s mimed and vocalized “phonetic punctuation.” The result was hilarious—and informative. Our sketch was no substitute for The Chicago Manual of Style or The MLA Handbook, but students left the classroom with an enriched understanding of footnotes—and refreshed by hearty laughter.

Our “Footnotes Sketch” became a campus hit. Instructors in all departments demanded that we perform it several times a week—somewhat to my chagrin, as my brilliant portrayal of Tom Wingfield in The Glass Menagerie went largely unrequested. ETC wasn’t easily stumped after all.

This anecdote, though true, may seem rather fanciful and digressive. It is. It’s also dead serious and to the point. Nietzsche wrote of “the seriousness one had as a child, at play.” That’s exactly the spirit I’m here to pursue. My point is that storytelling can enrich any topic in any discipline or class subject—at least I like to think so.

Can such methods be used to teach, say, math? I’ll pass over this question quickly. Math was and is my worst subject, I’m ashamed to say, and I’ve never tried to create any storied teaching materials for it. Nevertheless, I’ll toss out an idea and see if it has any legs.

Say you’re teaching basic coordinate graphing. Mightn’t the x-axis and the y-axis be portrayed as living characters, perhaps with strong disagreements about the data they’re trying to present—not just the raw information, but its meaning? Mightn’t their conflicts be dramatized through dialogue and physical action? And what about the points of data that go into the graph? Are they easily herded and arranged there, or do they put up a bit of a fight? And how can they first be drawn out of hiding?

I’ve never created any storytelling materials about biology either, but I’d like to give it a try. The natural world is rich in stories. The recent passing of the great biologist Lynn Margulis brings one readily to mind. Margulis’s major breakthrough concerned the origin of eukaryotic cells—highly complex cells with nuclei, as opposed to simpler prokaryotic cells such as bacteria. The appearance of eukaryotic cells was a major event in evolutionary history, allowing multicellular organisms like ourselves to eventually appear. But how did eukaryotic cells come to be? Such an evolutionary leap seems to defy imagination.

Margulis’s theory was beautifully simple—and if I may say so, poignantly moving. Once upon a time primeval, two simple prokaryotic cells met. One became engulfed by the other. But instead of mutual destruction, cooperation ensued, and the two cells learned to serve one another. Over millions of years, this process led to eukaryotic cells. Margulis’s idea (which itself seemed all-too-fanciful at the time) bore empirical fruit. Mitochondria and organelles are now recognized to have originated by such a process.

What a drama, eh? And why not stage it in a biology class, either as a scripted sketch or an improvisation? The two cells are characters. They collide and one becomes entangled in the other. They both panic. Can they survive this entanglement? They both fear strangulation. No strangulation ensues, and panic turns to paranoia. The outer cell fears that the engulfed cell will act as a deadly parasite, while engulfed cell fears being digested whole. They make peace and soon realize that they have something to offer one another. The surrounding cell can offer protection, while the engulfed cell can serve as a power source—a primitive mitochondrion. They continue through their lives, much stronger and fitter than before, chatting excitedly about what their union may mean to their progeny down through the ages.

Such a sketch can do more than merely illustrate this model, known as endosymbiotic theory. Margulis controversially claimed that her discovery challenged the Neo-Darwinian assumption that all evolutionary advances come from an endless struggle for survival. As Margulis and her son Dorion Sagan put it, “Life did not take over the globe by combat, but by networking.” The classroom sketch may stir a debate as to whether Margulis was right, or whether the endosymbiotic origin of eukaryotic cells actually shows good old-fashioned Survival of the Fittest in action.

To sum up a bit…

Classroom stories may be assigned either individually or in groups. The stories themselves may take the forms of written narratives or dialogues, dramatic improvisations, or rehearsed scripts that can be read at students’ desks or performed in front of the classroom. These days, I’m especially excited about videos. Kids have video cameras even in their cell phones, and many computers these days come with editing software.

In my next blog, I’ll suggest classroom story ideas in subjects that I’m closer to: Literature and History.

 

About the author: Wim Coleman is a playwright whose works have won national awards and have been presented in New York and Los Angeles, and he is an award-winning poet. He has also been a teacher, and has degrees in Theater, Literature, and Education. He usually writes in collaboration with his wife, Pat Perrin. Together, they have well over 100 publications. They publish independently for young people through ChironBooks. Wim and Pat lived in various parts of the United States before spending thirteen years in San Miguel de Allende, where they created and administered the San Miguel PEN Scholarship Program for at-risk students. They also adopted their daughter, Monse, there. All three of them now live in Chapel Hill, North Carolina.  You canlearn more about Wim and his work at his website.

12/06/2011

The Vital Importance of Story

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guest written by Wim Coleman of Chiron Books.

When it was suggested that I write a guest post for TestSoup about bringing narratives into the classroom, I was immediately thrilled. Then I was daunted.

My wife, Pat Perrin, and I met in Los Angeles in 1986. By the time we got married the next year, we were already collaborating full-time as writers. We’ve been writing together ever since—novels, plays, poems, and many, many different kinds of educational materials (we’ve both been teachers). Through more than two decades of collaboration, we have been obsessed by one single overriding theme: the vital importance of story.

So how to write a single post about bringing narrative into the classroom? I don’t think I can pull it off. It won’t do to just write about how to use stories without first getting into why. So I’ll write more than one post. I’ll devote this first one to Pat’s and my story-centered worldview, hinting at what it has to do with education.

To jump-start me with this post, Pat suggested that I take a fresh look at the first book we published together, PragMagic (Pocket Books, 1991). In it, we distilled a decade of reporting that had appeared in Marilyn Ferguson’s Brain/Mind Bulletin, a newsletter that had become a clearinghouse for all kinds of research and discoveries in science, health, creativity, psychology, social sciences, and education. Our job was to take all this information and turn it into a whopper of a self-help book. Our emphasis throughout the book was upon story: How can this or that piece of information be used to enrich the story of your life?

I hadn’t looked at the book for a long time (we’ve written lots of others since then). I peeked into the first chapter and noticed a section titled “The Power of Story.” There I found a quote by psychologist-educator Renée Fuller, the creator of the Ball-Stick-Bird phonics program:

“Making stories may, indeed, be fundamental to human thinking. The ability to comprehend a story—that is, to grasp meaning within a given context—may be more basic to human intelligence than anything measured by IQ tests. The need to make our life coherent, to make a story out of it, is probably so basic that we are unaware of its importance.”

Yes, our thinking exactly—except Pat and I would take it even further. We must learn to value even fictional narratives for the insights they can offer. Indeed, it is possible that few, if any, of the stories we live by aren’t, to some extent, fictions.

Around the time Pat and I were working on PragMagic, we also had the privilege of collaborating with cognitive philosopher Daniel C. Dennett on an experimental essay/story called “Media-Neutral,” which eventually appeared in our first novel The Jamais Vu Papers (Harmony/Crown, 1991) In it, a fictional character discovers that he’s a character in a book. Desperate to understand how being fictional affects his life, our character goes to Dennett for advice. “Media-Neutral” was great fun to work on, and Dennett threw himself into his therapist-philosopher role wholeheartedly.

Now, Dennett has taken flack over the years for his assertion that the human self is an “abstraction.” What! Doesn’t this mean that the self doesn’t exist? Not at all, Dennett has explained. An abstraction is a kind of fiction, certainly, but it can have real consequences in the world. Dennett likens the self to a center of gravity:

“A center of gravity is just an abstractum. It’s just a fictional object. But when I say it’s a fictional object, I do not mean to disparage it; it’s a wonderful fictional object, and it has a perfectly legitimate place within serious, sober, echt physical science.”

When you consider, say, what it would take to tip a chair over, you’re thinking, consciously or not, of the chair’s center of gravity. The center of gravity might be a fiction of sorts, but its effect upon the chair is plenty real. The self, suggests Dennett, might be described as a “center of narrative gravity.” I won’t try to explain that concept here; I doubt that I could! Just note the word “narrative.” Consciousness and the human self are outcomes of imaginative storytelling. We can’t get away from stories—indeed, fictional stories—for a single microsecond of our lives.

So we must tend well to our stories. In our memoir/essay “A Mexico of the Mind” (anthologized in Solamente en San Miguel, Windstorm, 2007), Pat and I offered this reflection:

“Storytelling, like all art, like life, is an act of learning—of finding out. We are mistaken to assume that stories of transformation are only about transformation, mere illustrations. Instead, they are transformation itself, acts of practical alchemy, with the power to alter the reality of every receptive person they touch. (That’s why we must learn to recognize a hate-based tale in any garb, and admit that nothing holy feeds on pain.) As we live our stories and tell them, we learn what they are about … and they change … and they transform.”

Taking all this into account, “using narrative in the classroom” sounds almost redundant. The classroom is filled with selves, and therefore with stories. It’s easy to visualize the classroom as a setting where a grand drama unfolds, where all those stories come together in a sweeping narrative. The issue, really, is what “subplots” you, as a teacher, can bring to this overarching story. How can you consciously and deliberately use stories to enhance your students’ learning?

In my next post, I’ll start getting down to brass tacks about that.

 

About the author: Wim Coleman is a playwright whose works have won national awards and have been presented in New York and Los Angeles, and he is an award-winning poet. He has also been a teacher, and has degrees in Theater, Literature, and Education. He usually writes in collaboration with his wife, Pat Perrin. Together, they have well over 100 publications. They publish independently for young people through ChironBooks. Wim and Pat lived in various parts of the United States before spending thirteen years in San Miguel de Allende, where they created and administered the San Miguel PEN Scholarship Program for at-risk students. They also adopted their daughter, Monse, there. All three of them now live in Chapel Hill, North Carolina.  You can learn more about Wim and his work at his website.

10/20/2011

Why Write about Education

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Just to make sure that you aren’t missing it, today is the National Day on Writing, also referred to as “Why I Write Day.”  Here are the details.

I’ve been reading a lot of different bloggers today that have decided to contribute a post or a tweet to the cause.  In most cases, their reasoning boils down to necessity.  In other words, they can’t not write.

It reminds me of what Bleeding Gums Murphy told Lisa Simpson (way back in the second season) — that “music is a fire in your belly that comes out of your mouth, so you better stick an instrument in front of it.”  Except instead of music and instruments we’re talking about writing and word processing documents.

For many, I’m sure that is the case.  We choose our hobbies and our careers most often because we cannot imagine a fulfilling existence without them.

So what does it say about me, having chosen a job that (in part) entails writing for an edtech company blog?  Why do I write?

First of all, let me set the record straight.  I don’t just write the occasional post on the TestSoup blog.  I write monthly for an entrepreneur’s blog, twice weekly for a local politics blog, and semi-regularly on my personal blog.  Clearly, I enjoy writing.

That’s certainly one component.  I write because I like to write.  But why write about education?

To say “it’s my job,” would be a cop-out.  There’s more to it than that.   I have been surrounded by academic types all my life.  Both my parents are teachers, and I know just how hard they work and what their work means to them.

I also know that there are literally hundreds of thousands of teachers out there just like them.  They invest their own time and money in their classrooms, and they never think twice about it.

Teaching, to me, is a very noble profession.  To be involved in education is to dedicate your life to a cause that is wholly worthwhile and indispensable.  It is membership in one of the oldest and most esteemed clubs in the world.

Writing about education — and interacting with those “in the club” — allows me to tap into that wonderful enthusiasm that most teachers have for their jobs.  In my own small way, I am brought closer to a community that I have always admired.  The thought that I might someday be able to give something back to that community is enough to make me continue.

Appreciate writers!  Appreciate educators!  Happy National Writing Day!

07/27/2011

How Grammarly and Bloom’s Taxonomy Help Teach Writing

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guest written by Kimberly Joki of Grammarly

When it comes to web tools for teaching writing, many educators are wary of writing editors and automatic checks that don’t so much “teach” as “tell.”  How does a student learn to write if a program does all the editing and revising for him? This article is meant to explain how Grammarly, the world’s most accurate automatic grammar check, and its family of services utilize a learning approach based on Bloom’s Taxonomy to help students perfect their writing themselves.

Before we begin, it’s important to be somewhat familiar with the services and features that Grammarly.com provides.  The primary service is a subscription-based writing and grammar check, the Grammarly Editor, that reviews texts for over 150 grammar, punctuation, usage, spelling, and citation errors.  There are also two free services: Grammarly Answers, a Q&A forum for the discussion of English grammar and writing, as well as Grammarly Handbook, an online reference tool that explains elements of grammar and writing using practical examples.  All of these services, when used together, create a great environment for learning and perfecting writing, but how do they actually use Bloom’s Taxonomy to accomplish this?

Knowledge and Comprehension

Both of these categories of the taxonomy are used throughout the Grammarly experience.  After students run a review in the Grammarly Editor, notes for revision are listed for their review.  As students read through the notes, they are guided back through their texts to correct errors or make edits.  Each note highlights an error or makes a suggestion that is named and briefly explained.  This forces students to recall information from class and facilitates knowing.  Additionally, the short and long explanations that accompany each note require students to understand the concept before being able to identify it in the highlighted sentence and make the correction.

Above: An example of a long explanation for “Wordiness caused by determiners and modifiers.” Note the options for a short explanation and to ‘Ask the community.’

Additionally, when students participate at Grammarly Answers, which is integrated into the Editor, they can ask and answer questions related to their writing.  At Answers, the dialogue that they can have about their writing promotes both knowledge and comprehension, particularly because they have a great opportunity to explain what they know and have learned to others.

Above: Grammarly Answers integration into the Editor.

Finally, the Grammarly Handbook aims to provide explanations of different writing elements to encourage recall of classroom lessons as well as to improve understanding so that knowledge can be practically applied.

Application

Application of new understandings of grammar and writing elements generally occurs right in the Editor as students review the correction notes, learn, and correct their writing.  They may, however, also find opportunities to use their understanding of a particular writing concept on the Answers forum.

Analysis

When using Grammarly, particularly Answers because it is a public forum, students will need to be able to distinguish between facts and opinion.  Also, the Grammarly Editor makes a number of suggestions regarding style and diction, which do not necessarily require a change to the student’s text.  In these situations, students will need to learn to asses how certain edits will impact and change the meaning of their writing.

Synthesis

During the writing process, and while using Grammarly, students will need use information from all sources — classroom, Grammarly’s services, and others — to complete and improve their writing composition.  Students can create (and re-create) their work right in the Grammarly Editor, then save the Editor’s notes as a PDF.

Evaluation

As students continue through the cyclical process of writing, they will have to judge and select those suggestions and improvements that are most helpful for their composition. Because the Editor does not simply make corrections for the students, they will be continually forced to evaluate the relevance of a given suggestion to their writing.  Likewise, students using Answers will need to choose, from a various contributions, which advice or information from the forum is most accurate.

Additional Thoughts

Looking at Grammarly’s services through the lens of Bloom’s Taxonomy helps to see how this can be a helpful tool for the improvement of student writing.  However, there are additional benefits to using this web tool alongside traditional classwork.

First, it takes a lot of anxiety out of editing.  Students, particularly those who are only becoming comfortable with writing, are not completely responsible for identifying potential errors and fixing them.  The guided approach of the Editor, along with the ability to get feedback from others via Answers, make the proofreading and editing process more relaxed.

Second, the ability to check and review some writing issues before entering into peer-editing or writing conferences with a teacher or professor can give students more confidence to address the problems that they have as well as to suggest corrections or enhancements to other’s writing during conferencing.

Third, with regular reports from the Grammarly Editor, students can begin to see patterns in their writing.  Knowing these patterns helps students see where they have had progress and where they can continue to improve.

Finally, teachers can similarly benefit from the feedback from the Grammarly Editor.  Each time a text is reviewed in the Editor, a list of errors and suggestions for that writing is generated.  This report can be printed and reviewed by the teacher as a way to confirm comprehension and application of in-class lessons.  This information can inform coursework.  For example, if an educator were to see that many students had frequent errors with modifiers, he could develop a lesson to address this lack of knowledge, then test for comprehension by using the Grammarly Editor or by posting a relevant text on Grammarly Answers and having students explain the error or correct it.

Conclusion

Grammarly.com has great services for helping students and teachers perfect student writing  In addition to being a useful writing tool, the service is convenient.  All of the Grammarly tools are completely based online, which means users can easily set up an account, can access the service from any place with an internet connection, and have no updates to download.  Finally, Grammarly is easy to try out.  All new individual accounts receive a 7-day free trial and new bulk or institutional licenses may also be eligible.

Registration

For individual registration, visit www.grammarly.com.  For registration of a bulk or institutional license, please visit Grammarly@edu or write to Gregory Carpets at greg.carpets@grammarly.com.